omg i love the story so far. the first chapter immediately draws you right into the story.

wow that's nice. i like it!

I like it so far! It's good. You do realize I'm gonna be really mad at you if you kill Zeke. I saw the label...tragedy. *sulks* Anyways...about how long is it gonna be? It seems to be moving really fast for a long story. I thought it was gonna be a short story/one-shot while I was reading it. Hurry up and update! :P