I really liked this one.
"Minutes slip away as I stare at the clock,
Hoping, wishing that this could be something great;"
my favorite part.
I wrote a thing about my grandma's death too. It's hard to get over somthing like that. I hope your doing okay.
peace love happiness

I love this one
It makes me feel sad
It reminds me of my grandma

I liked that alot. Esp. the imagery. I am sorry about your grandma.

Wow... reminds me of how I felt (and feel) about my aunt's death. She was really the only thing keeping me tied to my whole family, and maybe even my own sanity. But without her it's sorta like somebody untied the rope that was holding me to the dock... and now I'm drifting alone in the middle of nowhere, wishing I hadn't lost my anchor in the depths.

Ne? ^^

Amazing.