|Reviews for An angelic doom|
| I'm.Running.Out.Of.Ideas 4/5/09 . chapter 1
I liked it! Of course it may be because I've been a bit obsessed with demons and angels lately...
| Koneko Kanshaku 2/7/08 . chapter 1
not bad - but I found kinda wierd (like u said lol )
| SilverTwilight 12/2/07 . chapter 1
Ooh! I vote shot on sight. Kidding. The idea was original, and gripping. I think your writing style could have used a little more detail. It's worth continuing.
| Nemonus 9/24/07 . chapter 1
Your prose is pretty good. It flows well enough and your word choice is apt. I especially like "porcine" for the demon in the beginning. They're creepy, the demons. It's not a perfect work: you've got some extra commas as in "dragon wings were, about eighteen feet". However, your disclaimer about being new is understandable so I won't nitpick.