I liked it! Of course it may be because I've been a bit obsessed with demons and angels lately...

not bad - but I found kinda wierd (like u said lol )

Ooh! I vote shot on sight. Kidding. The idea was original, and gripping. I think your writing style could have used a little more detail. It's worth continuing.

Dx

Your prose is pretty good. It flows well enough and your word choice is apt. I especially like "porcine" for the demon in the beginning. They're creepy, the demons. It's not a perfect work: you've got some extra commas as in "dragon wings were, about eighteen feet". However, your disclaimer about being new is understandable so I won't nitpick.