this is very short, but still haunting. Good job.

awh! lots of emotion for so few words:( so sad!

it's simple but sad too, you know it's a nice poem, good.

Goodbyes are always so sad.

Nice poem.

Twilight Starr

I liked the honesty of this, it was very heartfelt, keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.