Cute. I think another stanza would be good too, just to really get the point of how evil marks are =) Unless of course they're good marks, in which they become beautiful XD

Here is mine:

Grades

Two numbers
A letter
Uncreative idiots
that decide your life.

Not as good as yours, but oh well, I tried. I think we all hate grades. I can sympathize.

If you have time, check out my story! That's all, keep writing, maybe something longer next time (actually, I see that you've written something longer, so I'll check that out when I have time)

Good luck, and TO HELL WITH GRADES!

You write a lot of really thoughtful things, dont you?
I've read a few others, and my next plan is to read the big one with 10 chapters is it?
I always get the urge to write in weird places.. generally maths.. which isn't all together good for my end of year report.
I like your style. :]

oh so true:) it's coolXD this is the shortest poem that I've ever read but i like it a lot!

I like this. It's short, concise, and oh so true :).

This is really nice. What I like about it most, is that even though it' only eight words, it holds a lot of meaning through itself and the title.

C.S.

Interesting, thoughtful poem.

By grades, do you mean grade level or grades as in what you get on a test?

I'm assuming you mean grade level.

~Twilight Starr~