Hey it's I again. I know what you're thinking "God! Annoying lil' Dillio!" But I'm gonna bug you with another reveiw anywho. This really is kind of jumbled, for the reader to take as they will. I'm guessing that your thoughts where jumbled when you wrote it? Not that that's a bad thing, mind you. It's just another style. Even Edgar Allen Poe (my hero) wrote some jumbled things. I love the ending stanza. "Don't want to know what we could be" leaves a very nice ring in my ears. It kind of explains what the peice was trying to say. Very nicely done once more!

~Dillio~