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| atreyu love 2008-08-10 ch 27,  | abuseisnt Xavier going to hurt sophie, kill her? and will Toulouse care? PLEASE UPDATE! |
| atreyu love 2008-08-10 ch 22, | abuseso Nate is a vampire?? How could he? But im glad, shes pregnant!! |
| Iluvzpapayas 2008-08-06 ch 19, | abuseIn this chapter it feels really rushed. |
| NightmareWriter 2008-06-23 ch 27, | abuseWhoa... harsh man. I'm shocked but it seems like him. At lease now she's away from the danky dungeon. It's a cool chapter! |
| deadlyprincess 2008-06-19 ch 27, | abusei'm a new reader to your story but love it so far. i hope you update soon. |
| Ice Nymph 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far but I hae one small correction. Ange is feminine so it should be "ma ange" instead of mon. |
| Silly-girl15 2008-06-17 ch 27, | abusegood chap! |
| dreamercrys 2008-06-17 ch 27, | abuseWow, I love it. I can't wait to see how long it takes him to find her. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-06-16 ch 27, | abuseplse don't tell me you're ending it here. I have to find out what happens. You just LOVE keeping me in suspense don't you? :) |
| CrimsonxShadows 2008-06-09 ch 22, | abuseWow, I cannot tell you how...wow. I'm speechless. Anything I say on here can't express how I feel about your writing. You're absolutely unique. Perfection. I love the plot, the diction, the syntax, the imagery; the relationships are complicated and realistic, the problem of the story continues on and on. I'm more than impressed with this piece of work. I'm absolutely shocked, in awe. Fantastic. Beautiful job. |
| Yvette-chan 2008-06-04 ch 26, anon. | abuseHAHA! Xavier would get what he deserved. I just love this chapter, Lulu! *two thumbs up* |
| Silly-girl15 2008-05-14 ch 26, | abuseGood stori! |
| NightmareWriter 2008-03-24 ch 26, | abuseWhoa! Awesome story! I absolutly love it! It's sad that she lost her baby, though. :( |
| Sweet123 2008-03-23 ch 15, | abuseQuinn needs to understand that this is a VAMPIRE. |
| Sweet123 2008-03-23 ch 14, | abuseI thought she was smart I stand corrected. |