Really emotional, dramatic poem. I think you should talk to my best friend emotionless-stares on this site... This is the same genre she writes in. I call her emo as a joke but now I feel bad about it...

Well, your message is clear. Those first lines of poetry was an excellent satire on so-called "emo-poetry". I'm not sure if I agree (as I honestly have no opinion in the matter), but hey, you wrote our your opinion, so that's great!

Hope my little review was helpful. You did say that you want a reason for why your story is good or bad, so for me, you story is good because it carries a clear and concise message. I didn't catch any serious errors, so that surely is good, right?

I've been through AP chem, but trust me, university chem is more of a horror than AP chem will ever, ever be. Wait till you get into second year and you'll understand, but I sympathize with you, honestly. School sucks in general, so that's that.

If you have the time and mood to write a review, please take a look at my story "Beyond the Horizon". I'm looking for some useful feedback, as I'm new to fictionpress and I'm really not sure about my own capabilities. It's only if you have the time and mood though. I can completely understand if you don't.

Either way, hope you have let out all your pent up anger towards emo poetry. I'll be checking out your other stories when I have time. Meanwhile, have fun writing and good luck on your AP exam!

you'll live. and laugh, actually; alot. depression will comes and goes throughout life for most people... at least you don't live as the majority of people on earth do, in the third world. good luck with perking up