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| Crash Fire 2008-05-26 ch 1, | I liked it a lot. Did you get a good grade on it? |
| Orual 2008-01-05 ch 1, | You did a nice job with your rhymthm and turn of phrase in this poem. I would have liked it to be more anecdote based and more exclusive to meth because I think this poem could be about any drug, but that's up to you if you want to revise. Nice work on the whole. |
| Ash of Lynne 2007-12-24 ch 1, | Someone I knew really well died of meth... so I know this really has powerful meaning. Great work! |
| Xx.h.o.l.l.y.m.a.r.i.e.xX 2007-10-29 ch 1, | That's very good! A lot of people can relate to that too. Great job. |