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| Twilight Starr 2008-03-02 ch 1,  | abuseGreat job at describing your feelings. We are all scared of goodbyes at times. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| crossoff 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abusea great poem about something we all have to do |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. |
| Vester 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseVery good. You used "two" incorrectly and if it was intentional, it wasn't obvious. The ending was weird too, you said there was A word but you wrote three words. This is such a sucky review, I can't review poetry I swear. I liked the hourglass part, it was clean and clear. the fading part was good too. Good luck with your poetry! |