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Reviews For: Goodbyes

Twilight Starr
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseGreat job at describing your feelings. We are all scared of goodbyes at times. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
crossoff
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abusea great poem about something we all have to do
Artemis Anderson
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written.
Vester
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuseVery good. You used "two" incorrectly and if it was intentional, it wasn't obvious. The ending was weird too, you said there was A word but you wrote three words. This is such a sucky review, I can't review poetry I swear. I liked the hourglass part, it was clean and clear. the fading part was good too. Good luck with your poetry!
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