|Reviews for Goodbyes|
| Twilight Starr 3/2/08 . chapter 1
Great job at describing your feelings. We are all scared of goodbyes at times. Nice work.
| crossoff 9/25/07 . chapter 1
a great poem about something we all have to do
| Artemis Anderson 9/24/07 . chapter 1
| Vester 9/24/07 . chapter 1
Very good. You used "two" incorrectly and if it was intentional, it wasn't obvious. The ending was weird too, you said there was A word but you wrote three words. This is such a sucky review, I can't review poetry I swear. I liked the hourglass part, it was clean and clear. the fading part was good too. Good luck with your poetry!