Great job at describing your feelings. We are all scared of goodbyes at times. Nice work.

Twilight Starr

a great poem about something we all have to do

Beautifully written.

Very good. You used "two" incorrectly and if it was intentional, it wasn't obvious. The ending was weird too, you said there was A word but you wrote three words. This is such a sucky review, I can't review poetry I swear. I liked the hourglass part, it was clean and clear. the fading part was good too. Good luck with your poetry!