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| J.K.Ellis 2008-04-28 ch 1,  | abuseVery sweet and simple. I'm usually not to keen on freeverse but the rhyme you used was actually quite pretty even if not complete. |
| fairytale failure 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It is simple, with great clarity, but still very poignant and sad. The part about 'disembark' sounded a little forced rhyming, but the second stanza was absolutely perfection. It was classic but somehow still modern, and it reminds me of how I saved all his emails. |
| kelsi bones 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI know EXACTLY how you feel. You express things so clearly; it's beautiful. k.X |
| Salister 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseThe simple, albeit elegant flow of the poem strikes me as articulate, in the same sense as describing the vivid brushstrokes of a wonderous and gorgeous painting. As always, well done. |
| DiaRose 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuse*Shivers*. I love when a poem gives me shivers. Love, ~Dia |
| Ramenluver 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was a friggin work of art. No joke. :)Faves. -Ramen |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written. |