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| A Healing Heart 2007-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseI so know what you mean. I can relate to this poem a lot. -Blood |
| Charity F 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI like this one more. I think using stanzas would have helped. I like some of the similes and images you explore here, but perhaps you could have delved a little deeper? Also: editing your work is an integral part of the creative process, and is also less irritating for your readers. So trry and avoid the grammar mistakes and the typos. |
| fictitious facades 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. i love it. could use some grammar/punctuation revision, but i'd be a hypocrit it i yelled at you for it. great job, really. |