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| A Healing Heart 2007-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this poem. you like long poems don't you? well, if you are writing long poems then i will more than happy to read them. -Blood |
| Charity F 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI think this at points lacks the rhythm with which it began. Also in the 16th line (i think) there is a typo - "reache" In general it didn't move me. There is a lack of emotion, although the words themselves seem to signify something more. |