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Reviews For: The End

Barrister Disaster 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseIts me again. This story is a good attempt to pour out wat exactly you are thinking of. To write a good story you must not write exactly what you think the way you think, and avoid meaningless repetion - ther are too many repetitions that are not making any impact in your story. for example in your last paragraph just try to reconstruct everything and avoid the whys there and you wil see wat result you will get. The repetion of Ideas is the most displeasing pls avoid it. The whole of the story is only a paragraph of three lines, try and add alot of things to make it really intresting. Sorry I didnt take my time to read other reviews. Keep Writing.
The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-09-25 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, a well-written, deep story! You'd done a great job with this! I liked how you wrote it in "I"-form, and how you portrayed the emotions in the story. Keep it up! The Reverse Edge Blade
emotionless-stares 2007-09-25 ch 1,	abuseDarn, your stories are pretty deep. Stupid Allen. I hope he has a miserable life. Why did he have to lead her on? I hate it when guys do that.