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Reviews For: The Beginning

axlaru
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abuse*sighs*
You write so well, my friend. I love yah.
The Reverse Edge Blade
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abuseI liked your descriptions through the story, and the words you used. You portrayed so well the conflict inside the main character!
I liked how you ended the story, with the main character actually going for it.
Keep it up! This was good!
The Reverse Edge Blade
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