wow! great last stanza- it really stands out but also ties everything together. I love the fact that I can't figure out what 'It' is either.

well done!

nice work

Oh my god. Oh my god. Why is it I am always left speechless with awe at your writing? Usually, I can't shut up. You have a gift here.

Sad, well written poem.

~Twilight Starr~

I really enjoyed reading this, especially the last two lines.

There is really something about this piece that is very interesting. The personification of this mysterious force seems to lead to a more metaphorical allegory that really keeps the reader in wondering what it is. The structure in the stanzas is very appropriate-each line seems to be sewn into the next. The last stanza is very prolonging; something about it really seems to last in your mind. I really like it, very contemporary.