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| Written 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abusewow! great last stanza- it really stands out but also ties everything together. I love the fact that I can't figure out what 'It' is either. well done! |
| AuraBorealis 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abusenice work |
| Angels Broken Shadow 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseOh my god. Oh my god. Why is it I am always left speechless with awe at your writing? Usually, I can't shut up. You have a gift here. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseSad, well written poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| InkySubstance 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this, especially the last two lines. |
| Julian Laverne 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThere is really something about this piece that is very interesting. The personification of this mysterious force seems to lead to a more metaphorical allegory that really keeps the reader in wondering what it is. The structure in the stanzas is very appropriate-each line seems to be sewn into the next. The last stanza is very prolonging; something about it really seems to last in your mind. I really like it, very contemporary. |