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Reviews For: Stronger

Written
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abusewow! great last stanza- it really stands out but also ties everything together. I love the fact that I can't figure out what 'It' is either.

well done!
AuraBorealis
2007-11-16
ch 1,
abusenice work
Angels Broken Shadow
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseOh my god. Oh my god. Why is it I am always left speechless with awe at your writing? Usually, I can't shut up. You have a gift here.
Twilight Starr
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseSad, well written poem.

~Twilight Starr~
InkySubstance
2007-09-30
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed reading this, especially the last two lines.
Julian Laverne
2007-09-27
ch 1,
abuseThere is really something about this piece that is very interesting. The personification of this mysterious force seems to lead to a more metaphorical allegory that really keeps the reader in wondering what it is. The structure in the stanzas is very appropriate-each line seems to be sewn into the next. The last stanza is very prolonging; something about it really seems to last in your mind. I really like it, very contemporary.
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