I loved reading this.

Stumbled on this and read it. Then I read the only review for it. Had to comment.
Whoever that was, ignore them. Lack of commas... whatever. You wrote a perfect little bit of flash fiction, in a simple style, with all the punctuation and syntax it needed to be what it needed to be. It was GOOD.
So thanks for writing it!

-Jake

I liked this quite a lot! It's clever and well-written, and I enjoyed it very much. You have some minor punctuation errors (missing commas, mostly), and perhaps you should make it into several paragraphs, but overall it's well-written.
Wouldn't it be nice if we could take our tears out with the trash on Friday and simply not think of them any more?