Wow, here is a hero who robs the rich and helps the poor. Cool! I like all the similes that you have used to describe Christopher Fox.
"So if you should walk in the forest one day,
If you frolic or run or just want to play,
You might catch his eye. Then he'll wink and away.
Sly as he is, that Christopher Fox."
He winks? This little detail has added depth to his character. Great!

This is lovely! I can imagine an illustrated book based on this poem, or a full-length story. For some reason, I really like this. It has the charm of one of Aesop's fables, crossed with Robin Hood.

Excellent!

Em

This is a very cute poem. I like the rhyming, very perfect for a kids' poem.

I don't really notice any revisions, but it's still a good poem. ^_^

By the way, we haven't talked in FOREVER. That will have to change soon. -nods- :D

Yes! Got the alert for this when it was re-posted. I like the way you set it up in the beginning 'I've seen him, you know...', it's like one of those stories that begin with 'this happened to a friend of a friend of mine...'. Then the repetition of the last line brings a cheery structure to the poem. Ending is perfect. It's one of my all time favourite poems ever (and I know all time and ever say the same thing, but I just meant to stress that it's a very cute poem). Best of luck for where ever you go with this!

Bread

This is cute :) I like it. It has sort of a bouncy rhythm to it that I think kids would enjoy.