   CitiOwlsCry 2009-10-17 . chapter 12HOT. Continue Continue!!
I love it XD
Gimme Gimme MORE! XD
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 dizzymslizzy 2009-08-16 . chapter 12this is so freaking good! what's next? can't wait for u to add more :D |
 blah 2009-06-08 . chapter 12 ohh snap...you have to update...i just love this story...i wonder what will happen next...? mhm ...sounds interesting...and intense...and so freaking H-O-T...are you going to get them to do more...? and this story is suspense, that one of the parents will find out... |
| amy 2009-05-31 . chapter 12 Will you continue this story? I should probably give up on it but I still have it in my bookmarks. PLEASE continue! It's awesome |
 StoicCrying 2009-04-22 . chapter 12Avery got a hard-on? LMAO!
update sooN! I wonder if the father will get in the picture? (Avery's) |
 Starlite nightfall:MOO MOO 2009-04-05 . chapter 12OH MY GOD, you have to update soon..@o@...I don't think I ever reviewed the last time I read this, but I love it and I can't wait for more! I WANNA know what happens lolz!..♥ A+!! I love it...OwO
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 ValuedOpinion 2009-03-11 . chapter 12consider this my harassment to get chapter 13 done. :P Anywho, it's been over 7 months since you last updated and since i'm pretty sure it doesn't take that long to finish a chapter, i was just wondering if you were planning to continue this story. Seriously, it's just starting to get really good :D and you did say that you'd start chapter 13 ASAP, and that was a while ago. so...PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE keep writing!! Can't wait to read the next chapter WHEN you finish it! :P |
| anne 2009-02-17 . chapter 12 please continue this story! i love it so much |
 Kittens In Baskets 2009-02-01 . chapter 12Hehe, I love how innocent and confused poor Avery is :D You should write more, it's incred! |
 Walkofthecookiemonster 2009-01-05 . chapter 10"This is my fort, and I shall call it Fort Spencer! Nobody but me is allowed in it!" bahaha i LOVED that! genuis! |
 LimeSmoothie 2008-12-27 . chapter 12I LOVE! |
 xXEzaelePlusMorpheusXx 2008-12-21 . chapter 12I swear! IF I DONT SEE CHAPTER 13 I WILL DESTROY U WITH MY BARE HANDS ^_^I joke I joke>_>
though seriously the truth is, this story ROX continue, M on M is sexaii :P and ths story is not centered on sex *thank goodness for that!* it is centered on love |
| .,.,., 2008-11-22 . chapter 12 I love this story
Can't wait for the next chapter
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 Twig'um 2008-11-02 . chapter 12omgomgomg he got a HARD-ON! fuck u rock my socks!! i love this story!! |
| mado 2008-10-26 . chapter 7 aww this chapter was so funny! I was laughing like crazy!!
thank you |
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