Reviews for Opposites Attract

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Dougie-Wougie-Bear 2008-06-28 ch 10, anon.	abuseI just LOVE the end of this chapter! I was like...'gah, need inspiration! CARLEY!' And I got my inspiration &^^&! NEP! I love this chapter SO much! I just love all of this really...it makes me laugh like...like...a sadist mocking a hippo in labour. ^^. So yeah! From your no.1 fanboy (back off bitches- that means YOU Sagey!), Dougie-Wougie-Bear. INNIT!
emmielou 2008-06-26 ch 10,	abuseYay they finally kissed! celebrates and dances Love it!!
Dust Mowt 2008-06-21 ch 9,	abuseIT.
Dust Mowt 2008-06-21 ch 8,	abuseLOVE
Dust Mowt 2008-06-21 ch 7,	abuseBABY NAMES! XD! I love Eden...and Avery's bitchiness...words cant even describe... "she looked back, apprehensively and saw Chad waving so fast it looked like his hand was about to fly off his wrist and crash through the window."- I can just picture Lauren's look! XD! I bet Lauren knows they're both GAY. :D. ""That's okay, Lauren. The feeling is mutual. He acts like such a girl, sometimes I wonder if he even has a dick.""- Well Eden, there's only one way to find out... "Avery wiped the residue off his face and glared at the other boy, who was somehow being entertained by rolling a pencil around on the desk."- Eden is a genious!! ""Hey! I'm holding my child! You can't hurt me while I'm holding my child!" he squealed."- Avery always did have strong maternal instincts... "Lauren groaned, "Chad has it . . . but he wants me to go over to his house today so we can 'bond as a new family'"- Screams in delight. XD! I LOVE DAY ONE OF DOLLY HEAVEN! Ok...so I became just too tired to review any more...so now I'm just going to say I LOVE IT and go to bed...
Dust Mowt 2008-06-21 ch 6,	abuseAvery is one hot nerd. I find it so weird that your main characters only seem to develop friends like, WAY into your stories! Whee! "She often told students to "find their happy place.""- I BET MS. HANNEN WANTS TO FIND IT FOR THEM!! I love Avery. HAHAHA! HE GOT ABUSED BY EDEN IN SPEEDBALL! FIT! ""You're supposed to catch it, damn it!" Eden yelled. "Go fuck yourself!" Avery snapped back"- RAWL! I'm going to pretend there's sexual tension even when there isn't!! ""Because . . . your mom!""- I love 'your mom' comments xD. ""That comment was completely asinine, but since it came from you it was to be expected.""- I was like...CARLEY USED A BIG WORD!? :OO "He was glad for one thing though . . ."- I thought he was gonna be glad cause he got to see guys strip or something XD. "What if it was like in prison where you accidentally dropped the soap and then--"- SCREAMS! I thought of Oscar... "And why would students just rape each other?!"- this had me laughing so badly!! XD! "He wasn't overly muscular, just well toned . . . and Avery had no idea why he couldn't stop staring!"- Swoons. "I guess I'll be fine as long as it's not with . . . Chad!" Lauren said, as if saying his very name would give her some type of disease."- it's called gonorrhea. Don't have unprotected sex kids. "He was pretty much your stereotypical nerd. His glasses were big and sliver framed, he had braces, gelled back hair and acne all over his face. He even wore a pocket protector!"- The new Eden? I bet he's a dark horse really...RAWL. ""That's kind of a big thing to forget . . . have you considered a restraining order?" he was half-joking, but then . . . not really."-XD. "This is a team effort! With two, you are one!"- that had me in tears... LAUREN IS MY NEW FAVOURITE! FUCK YOU AVERY! "Chad just appeared eerily quick in the seat next to Lauren. "Looks like you're Mrs. Lauren Wrinkley for this whole week!" he said, draping an arm around her."- SCREAMS Phwoar! What a man! (And the surname 'Wrinkley'...genious). IS EDEN SLEEPING WITH TOM?? PLEASE SAY YES! THEN PLEASE SAY THAT AVERY'S GONNA JOIN IN. ""Excuse me, but what is so wrong with two boys and a baby?! Hello people, this is the real world! There will be homosexual couples out there who happen to want a child!""- I stand corrected. Ms. Hannen. You are my new love.
Dust Mowt 2008-06-21 ch 5,	abuse"'Could my life get any worse?!' Avery thought."- HEHEHE! I can just imagine him saying that really camply...whilst limping his wrist... AND I LOVE HOW YOU ALWAYS DESCRIBE AVERY AS 'shrieking' or 'screaming'...like a big girly-wirl. :D. HAHAHAHA! I don't even know what 'Gimme More' sounds like...but if it's overtly gay then: (Y). Avery kills me... "XD! OMGGOMG! I bet Eden had the whole 'I'm a tool' look on his face as he was hitching!! XD!!"- omgomgomgogmogmogmgomgomgogmgomgomgomgomggomgomgomgomgogmogmgomgomgomgomomgomgogmogmogmgomgomogmgomogmgomgomgomgogmogmgomogmgomgomgomg (mog). I. LOVE. IT. I love how we just rip Micheal Jackson for the fun of it! WE SLAUGHTER HIM! OMG. And I love the rapist...he sounds WELL fit. " They hadn't even been driving for 5 minutes and he was already tempted to open the door and fling himself out of the vehicle."- THE IMAGE!! I can just image Avery going all lemming-like! "Then the guy surprised them both when he burst out laughing. His eyes seemed to buldge out of their sockets and you could see white all the way around. A clear indication of a psycho."- Spontaneous Collapse. ""Well, we were just sitting at our table, everything was normal. But once James told me he had something for me, a huge rock shatters the window and lands right on our table!" Lydia explained. Avery and Eden acted surprised and nodded."- GUILTY! GUILTY! ""So . . . is that all James gave you?" he asked, cautiously."- AVERY'S A DAMN CLEVER BOY! HE KNOWS ABOUT THE GENITAL WARTS! EE! I loved this chapter! I died laughing with that psycho...and now to the next! Sleep be damned!
Dust Mowt 2008-06-21 ch 4,	abuseMee! ¬¬ I feel that I haven't been bumming you enough lately and for my own peace of mind, I couldn't sleep with the thought that you've reviewed absolutely everything of mine and I'd left about 6 chapters of this unraped! And so, at half 6 in the morning, lepered from lack of sleep, I begin! But they'll be short ones :(, because otherwise I will die. "So the next couple of weeks have been total suckage for Avery."-JUST THE WORD SUCKAGE GOT ME!! XD! I even ignored your naughty little tense change for that sentence! (you SHOULD have said 'were'- TUT TUT LOVER). I was going to skim read this chappie, seeing as I've already read it like...5 times before, BUT I JUST GOT ABSORBED! This story is like...a fat guy with a gravitational field. OO! PSYCHIC! They both know it's 'a stomach thing'. It must be love...or herpes. :D. ""Oh well, it'd be nice for it to be just the two of us. It'd be better for what I have planned anyways . . .""- ew. I know it's nothing gross, but when I read it...I keep thinking they're gonna have SEX and that they almost brought Eden and Avery along to WATCH. O_o... but at the same time...:P XD! I Love how Eden is JUST SO CHILDISH! And, of course, just so damn hot. Edible? But of course... XD! Hehehe! I love how you've cliched even the name of the cafe xD! "Red Pepper Cafe"- XD! I don't even know why that made me laugh!! XD! PRANK CALLS!! OMFG!! "Then Eden saw his dad reach into his pocket for something . . ."- I SO thought that was you being a perv!! OMG THE ROCK! OMGOMGOGMGOMGOM THAT MADE ME LAUGH!! AGAIN!! HAHAHAHAHA. I don't think I'm gong to sleep tonight...
gothicHobbit08 2008-06-20 ch 11,	abuseOMFG Fluffy! squee So I think it's kinda funny how Avery and Eden are in the same situation, but Avery seems so much more confused because where Eden isn't really fazed by confusion, Avery can't stand it. I think it's weird because I can kind of relate to both of them in different ways... Keep updating or else I'll... well, I can't do much of anything about it, so you'd better keep updating so I don't have to figure out what to do to bug you about it!
gothicHobbit08 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abuseha-ha... no really, I feel bad for Lauren, but this is just what Avery and Eden need... XD It was completely forseeable, but I think that's okay in this case.
Rezin's Black Rose 2008-06-10 ch 11,	abuseHoly crap. You updated MONTHS ago and I didn't even realize it. Then again, I haven't been online for a long time, either. I would put this story on alert, but the reason I never do that is because I hardly ever bother to check my e-mail, so it wouldn't do any good. Anyway, back to writing the review I meant to write: This chapter I can see the distinctions between Eden and Avery more than ever. Eden was obviously more relaxed and open minded, while Avery was just plain freaking out. I like the fact that Eden seems more...dominant? Is that the right word? Anyway, Eden seems to be much more forward than Avery. I liked the fluffy-ness of the chapter. Very cute. Teehee. I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see what you have planned for them next. ^^ Oh, and p.s., Lauren was so right. The whole "I have a friend..." thing is so obvious these days. But I guess if it made Avery feel better...then again, Lauren saw right through him and called him on his bluff. It was highly entertaining. -Aim
Emily Autumn 2008-05-24 ch 11,	abuseTHIS IS SO CUTE! I really really really really love this story. And Eden is acting so cute! They're gonna be great together...hope it's soon... Can't wait for the next update!
Emily Autumn 2008-05-23 ch 4,	abusehahaha this is great...
Yellow skittles 2008-05-23 ch 8,	abuseSan Juan Islands? Does this take place in Washington? If so yay! I have been to the San Juan Islands (if they are the ones in Washington) I love Orcus Island.
Razor to Rosary 2008-05-23 ch 11,	abuseOh, please please please please PLEASE, update! I'm absolutely caught up in your story! You can't stop now! Love everything about it (including the randomness) XD Update, yes? Thanks! - Barbara

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