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| DragonessOfTheNight 2007-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseAbsolutly. **. Amazing. Is there any other way to describe it? I think not. The beginning was a perfect hook, and the little thing about them really being hallucinations at the end was just /perfect/. -Sporkie |
| Benneh 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseOh now the ending of this I like! Very well done. The ideas about demons are interesting, especially your explanation of the pleasant way in which they interact with humans. The effect on the man character's psyche and, consequently his marriage is a very nice way of bringing some very harsh humanity to the character. It's obviously a well thought out piece of work. I look forward to reading more work from you. |
| EmoDefier 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. This is so good. The story was captivating; I couldn't stop reading it. And then the twist at the end just made it perfect, a bit of levity, i guess. lol Definitely adding to my faves! |