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| chibi 2008-06-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseOoh, love triangles are so much fun! I hope to see this that you continue this story as it has definite potential to becoming a very, very engaging story. |
| JtheChosen1 2008-02-22 ch 2,  | abusethis is a great story with an original story line! very detailed and very intense! i hope that u overcome ur writer's block for this! |
| krista-pixie 2008-01-26 ch 2, | abusethis is a great story too! you're fantastic! |
| Jayn 2007-12-19 ch 2, | abuse*Smacks Herren* Idiot boy. Even if you married out of duty you should take care of her and be there when she gives birth! Stupid idiot... Okay, done ranting. Please update!! |
| Becks-007 2007-10-25 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter ^_~ I wonder what Herren's going to do to Rooke... |
| nonaccount 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseUh, I don't know how I feel about this dangerous love triangle that you're setting up here . . . on the other hand, I do like the story so far. Rooke's personality is definitely endearing and poor Malikar needs love and attention in his starved life. |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-10-23 ch 2, | abuseOh, I like this a lot. Herren is perfectly nasty, Malikar is so sweet and shy, but all grumpy too...! And Rooke? He's just damn weird, and very forward in his actions too I think...hm...I would have liked to know more of how Malikar and Rooke came to like each other you know, more of what they were thinking or what was happening you know, but still, I can't fault you, it's amazing work. Anyways, I'm gonna go check out your profile now, and pretty please update soon hun! Luv, I-B-Y-F, x |
| Amerez 2007-10-21 ch 2, | abuseoh, no! Scary Lord Herren is gonna do something evil...cute story btw. |
| FinalDraft 2007-10-21 ch 2, | abusepoor Emilia...baby? oh dear, and in the city? That means they must be moving. It's like there are two plot lines. interesting. |
| Becks-007 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI think this will be a cool story. It kind of reminds me of Harvest Moon, in that it's on a farm... and Malikar is keeping it up on his own. lol, so it's not exactly like a H.M. game. But I like this first chapter, and I hope there will be more on the way! |
| kiki 2007-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abusenice... please update soon! |
| Limited Edition 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseThis story begins in a fashion that isn't even TRYING to be interesting. If I knew my morning routines are this interesting, I'd put them up on youtube. It continues in the same tone. I'm very surprised, although very bored. I'm thinking about some old grandma just yappering and yappering and yappering. Okay, I skipped the paragraphs between the second paragraph and the last one XD Sorry. What I noticed in the last two paragraphs was that it's telling instead of showing. Oh my, am I being too mean? |
| FinalDraft 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseThis story is interesting and I am interested in seeing where it goes though. Upadate SOON...but update your other story sooner. |