this is sad you really feel the pain of you and ur relationship

I can really relate to this. It's really sad how distance changes everything, I've lost a lot of close friends because of it. Anyway, this is a really well written poem with a very clear message. Good job :).

Really well written, the emotion you've brought through with this poem is beautifully done. The last two lines are powerful. Great work, keep writing! And thanks so much for the review!