Beautiful.

seems kind of picky. if i were a guy i wouldn't wanna be with someone who thinks like that. but i guess this was supposed to be romantic or some cheese like that...

*gets all teary-eyed*
I feel so lucky!
This little Want Ad summed up everything my boyfriend is/does!
Squee!
Not to mention it made me laugh. Many times. It's very true from the POV of every woman out there!

WOW! I love it. It really made my heart melt. This is truely what girls really want from their boyfriends. Well at least I do. I didn't see anything out of place to me. I thought that even more could have been writen. Because with something like this something can be said more. But it seemed perfect to me.

I just realized that EVERY SINGLE WOMAN wants the same guy. Very well, written, and touching, but if you really think about it, you're asking for an impossible, my dear. Well, Miracles DO happen sometimes.

This is wonderful! Very... I don't know, is insightful the right word? Probably not, but it's great.

sigh
if and when i find the right guy
he's definitely going to see this lol
loved it

izzie

Again, greetings!

So very true, I have to say. But of course, that comes only from a female's point of view. It'd be great if there was a point of view of a man or make it numbered and have an explanation right after, to make it more descriptive. But of course, it's just a suggestion.

Amazing-that's all I have to say. Some of the requirements did make me laugh though. I like the Let me be stubborn. Dont tell me I can't anything. Yeah thats definitely how I feel. I like how this explicitly points out that you can show feelings without words :)

I am neither perfect or the best -yeah don't you hate that. I feel like I'm on a *insert word here* pedestal.

Ok Im supposed to review not rant. I think that the top part that says Someone who will do the following sincerely and with a kind gentle heart should be seperated from the list kind of like

Wanted :Someone who will do the following sincerely and with a kind, gentle heart.

Then the list shall follow after if not if seems like its part of the things to do just by looking at it ofcourse.

That's pretty much it.

Must go study now, exam tomorrow afternoon ciao

Wow, by BF is a REAL pearl. He actually does all that. And having it put in words like this, I feel so demanding! I hope he demands just as much of me.

Brilliant piece though. The funny thing is, this IS an ad, and it's still not written like many fics out there which describe their character like in an ad (My name is Tiffany, I have opal eyes and rainbowcoloured hair, I'm 6 feet tall and very slim, blah blah blah").

Good job!

i loved it! That would utterly be the perfect guy!! The man of every females dreams huh?
Does such a male even exist!? haha i hope so XD

But great job! you made very good points about how you/women should be treated or would like to be treated. I loved it!=P

~RL~