oo. girlie. i dont even read :P some mixture of add and lazines.. but thiss... u got me hookedd:] u best write more.. very soon coz ill be waitingg.. seriously. write more write more. i love your style i love the way u describe stuffs & especially chap 4.. u can writee :D

i've been waiting so long for an update, i almost ** my pants when i saw that you did. (that's a slight exaggeration, of course) but i love the narrator so much, she just has this flair and expresses a side of me i wish was true.

great job. :]

'** story-book love.'
hahaha, i love it

this... is powerful. i want more.

Hm. This piece is so delicious.
Sorry. That's been my word lately.
But it really is. I love the descriptions of Polly, and since the story's about her there is much more pertaining to Polly than the main character, which I like.
She seems more interesting, honestly.
I like this.

the chemistry between the characters works well, the curiosity of the main character and the mystery of Polly. I'd like to know more about the main character though. I can't even remember her name.

i like this.
this... i want to keep reading it.

yup i think im falling in love with polly, the mysterious rebel.

I like this. I'm pumped to read more. I have a feeling I could fall in love with Polly :)