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| simpleplan13 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseI like this.. the questions it asks are really wonderful and definitely make you think A few things... -Have you ever look at a little kid at Christmas time and wonder what.. have you ever wondered -Santa Clause.. Santa Claus -It was so care free, aloof even... carefree and aloof has kinda a negative connotation so it seems like and odd word choice -I wish I could have my innocents back... innocence As I said before thanks for the reviews & check out the review marathon (link in my profile) |
| Sendo1920 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseI agree, nicely done! :DD I loved the message and the way you formated it. |