I love this story, is adorable. I like how is mostly made of dialogues, with are hilarious and well developed. The ending was great too.

well that was something new...lol

Hello dear...
I love your story, it's cute, funny.
You must write a book... 'cause I'll love to read.
Congratulations.
Janaina

Absolutely Hilarious!!

haha. funny.
and yes, i know. this review is very late...

Applause for setting up the story only with dialogue! Also very funny, pretty sure I'm getting strange looks from people for laughing out loud by myself...

That's awesome. Now I'm a happy bubbly idiot again. See what good stories do to me? Even though technically it's more of a conversation than a story, but I still favorited it, didn't I?

Totally amazing, seriously.

Hahahahaha, that was cute.
JM

best dialoge i've ever read! congratulations!

I just read this for the second time and enjoyed it as much as I did last time. This is fantastic, such quirky lovable characters!

I loved this! It had me laughing the whole way through. :)

Ha, that was fun! ^_^ I son't know what else to say besides that I'm laughing while wondering how you came up with the pizza oragasm thing.

I love dialogue stories now! And I loved how the scenes changes but you could still tell what was going on. Very original, from what I have read. Nice work!

Aww, adorable story. Green peppers and sausage is definitely an different type of pizza. I liked the dialogue. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~