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| Vidavril 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abusebest dialoge i've ever read! congratulations! |
| emeraldjoyedas 2008-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just read this for the second time and enjoyed it as much as I did last time. This is fantastic, such quirky lovable characters! |
| everybodyloveschocolate 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! It had me laughing the whole way through. :) |
| Roman C Lee 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHa, that was fun! ^_^ I son't know what else to say besides that I'm laughing while wondering how you came up with the pizza oragasm thing. |
| GrannyP 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI love dialogue stories now! And I loved how the scenes changes but you could still tell what was going on. Very original, from what I have read. Nice work! |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseAww, adorable story. Green peppers and sausage is definitely an different type of pizza. I liked the dialogue. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| RoseLife 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL! cuute loved how it was all dialogue :D great job ^^ |
| cbprice25 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Great dialogue. |
| Pinkamoo 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseAw, cute! Favourited. Good job! |
| Four and Twenty Blackbirds 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. :) |
| Pieces of the sun 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHilariously quirky. |
| Hearts To Rome 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusethat was so cute. i felt happiness of the cuteness washing over me... :) |
| the wicked monkey 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abusethis was cute. i adored it :) but how do you pronounce the guys name...lard?? ehh, that's rather different ah well -- the wicked monkey |
| Lily Llynn 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseHilariously funny. XD Pretty well-written (except I was confused at this line: “I see… Will pizza help? Green peppers and sausage, I wheedled in a charming voice that she could not resist. Oh, look! You’re smiling!”), but that was it. This was cute and kinda fluffy and just quite funny. (: I love, love, love it, and I'm adding it to my c2 right now. (: |
| gulistanlik 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseLol! I laughed throughout this whole fic! Wait a go to make my day plenty of notches brighter! =D The whole dialogue structure works well too. At first I was confused at what was going on where but then I understood. That was cute and Laird is hilarious! Hahaha! Thanks for a wonderful crack up and sweet fic! A job well done indeed. =D gulistanlik |