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Reviews For: Unprepared

Archeia
2007-10-28
ch 4,
abuseSque, I can't wait for more! Poo!
Twilight Starr
2007-10-20
ch 4,
abuseI doubt he told them everything.

Good chapter and job!

Looking forward to more.

Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr
2007-10-09
ch 3,
abuseThanks for the shoutout and reviewing my story "Unusual Dawn". I really appreciate it. ^^

I forgot to mention in the last chapter that her saying she was stabbed with a fork was hilarious! And so obvious it was a vampire bit.

That would be so creepy to have a guy walk up to you, bite you, and then say he'll see you again.

I like the story title. ;)

Looking forward to more.

~Twilight Starr~
Archeia
2007-10-09
ch 3,
abuseHey! You aren't allowed to write anything else! I want more of this story! >=[

Don't be cruel, I really like it!
Twilight Starr
2007-09-28
ch 2,
abuseAwesome chapter. I love your character's narration. It's amusing. ;)

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr
2007-09-26
ch 1,
abuseGood start.

The story has potential.

Good luck with writing and this story.

Have a lovely day. :)

~Twilight Starr~
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