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| Dr. Leftie Mancino 2008-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great! You really made this story come to life. :) I love it. -Leftie* |
| Mireille Caelarily 2007-10-02 ch 1,  | abuseI love it, as always. Somehow you manage to fit a lot of impressions and experiences into a fairly short chronological space, with good writing as a constant. I admire in this, as I do in other works, how you can share a distinct and succinct experience/story/emotion in a line or two. Very nicely done. of course. |