Reviews for Sympathy For The Zombie

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Kezzi 2008-07-23 ch 26,	abuseOhmygiddygod. I just spent well over 3 hours reading the whole thing; I didn't even realise it was 2:30am! This story is awesome and has me totally hooked. I'm so happy you didn't give up on it, and I'm really eager for more! Your zombie descriptions are unbelievably gross. I love it. xD You mustmustmust carry this on. I have a pair of rabid pants that will glady infect you if you don't. :3
Leinnansidhe 2008-07-23 ch 26,	abuseIn the words of a thirteen year old girl: OMG! What a twist! This chapter was great! More serious, by far, but awesome. Poor Aiden. I like the romantic development, it feels real. You don't get that a lot. It makes me terribly happy, but I expect nothing less from you. love, love, LOVE! Keep writing, m'dear!
RandomActs 2008-07-23 ch 26,	abuseFinally! Physicality between those two! Aidan shows his underbelly and Lilly zips her lip and lets her man talk! GREAT writing on the conversations! You accomplished alot in this chapter , you built a bridge to what comes next and deepened their (ahem) relationship at the same time. You must keep your rhythym up though (this is a hint not to leave us in the lurch). Kudos!
RandomActs 2008-07-23 ch 25,	abuseI LOVE your sense of humor my dear. It is sharp but still embodies emotion. YUMY chapter with just a hint of what is to come. ONWARD!
Dellarose 2008-07-23 ch 26,	abuseZomblets? Love? Mysterious man with a messenger bag? RALPHY? Well, no Ralphy yet, and it’s not that I want to pressure you into writing him in, but I look to the horizon for my beloved favorite character to make HIS prodigal return. Now, very interesting turn of events with the letter and the soon to be separation. I just want to nom-nom-nom on this story, love. Yaya! AND Aiden and Lily are so cute. Together. I was like “aaw” the entire chapter. And the second to last line. SO ADORABLE. You have filled my heart with warm and fuzzy feelings for the rest of the day. Continue to write my darling and give me a reason to check my email daily! ^-^
Iced Tea Junkie 2008-07-23 ch 2,	abuseBloody brill, dawg! Can't read it all now, I'm afraid, as it is 5:00 AM where I'm situated, and that is considered an unnatural hour by the morning larks. I'd best get some shut-eye. P.S. I think you should check out my story, "The Student Bible". I notice some similarities in our humor styles.
That One Dork, Stacey 2008-07-23 ch 26, anon.	abuseAW! :[ This was all.. Nicely written? :[ I loved it.. I only wish you'd hurry up and get famous from this story so you could publish lots and lots of series.. Long ones :] lol but yes! This is just what I needed. I was going bored out of my mind. Thank jeefuss you updated because it was like killing two birds with one stone :\| I was entertained AND I got to read you're updated chapter :D WHO! :] so happy :] lol Update soon :] por moi? X_x
Leinnansidhe 2008-07-21 ch 25,	abuseMERCY! I'm sorry, my dear, for my extended absence! I don't have a computer at the moment, which has made reviewing and posting a tad bit difficult. The good news? The device is being fixed as we speak. I love this chapter! I love this story! I love Lillian! I am anxious for the next chapter, fer cereal.
Zorin 2008-07-17 ch 25,	abuseu_u-b I'm really tempted to just end this review with the expression above, because really, what can I say? That this was a good chapter and I feel totally glad that I let the alert languish in my inbox for a bit? That it was good to see the suddenly-missing Aidan in a consecutive chapter? That Lilian found Aidan without too much trouble? (Connor notwithstanding, though admittedly he was more troublesome than actual trouble.) That I feel Lilian's character development? That, again, I'm looking forward to your next chapter? WITH VENGEANCE? (This doesn't make sense but no one's keeping a record.) Really. There's not much I could say so I leave you with this: u_u-b
Schizophrenic Unicorn 2008-07-17 ch 25,	abuseI love your story, update soon ^_^
Dellarose 2008-07-17 ch 25,	abuseMEOW! You return again! Oh happy day! :D Okay, so I normally don't wake up very early, seeing as it's summer, but today I woke up and I was like "dude, why am I conscious?" but then I checked my email and BAM. I am awake because the cosmic forces wanted me to read this immediately. I dropped everything and read. Richard Matheson, anyone? I AM LEGEND? Whee. I really loved it, as per usual. I feel like Lily has matured a bit. Sort of. Still quirky and wonderful, but definitely more mature. Connor was a great addition. Wacky, loved the bit about the expensive sunglasses (somehow, that spoke volumes of his character) and the part about the bacon was pretty funny…until he got creepy about “running through partners like crazy”. Was that a cannibalistic undertone or have I just gone insane? Still, gross, but I have to admit he has won my love by being a criminal puppeteer. The part with Aiden was superb. I was wondering if Lily would find him in this chapter or if her journey would take her a while. Really glad she found him, because the lego line was genius. Oh dear god, please keep writing.
Underground Soul 2008-07-17 ch 25,	abuseI love this story, it's realy interesting, and so original. Gald you updated.More soon please!
That One Dork, Stacey 2008-07-17 ch 25, anon.	abuseWOW! I didn't think you'd ever update :[ but im so glad you did. And thanks for the Recognition in your Author's notes in the beginning of the chapters :] You had me going for a while. Before you made it clear that Connor was a little scrambled-minded, I thought that he'd become one of Lilian's future possible love interests lol. And. I dont want to be someone to point out your mistakes or anything but I just noticed a few things :[ In the Sentence,[A little after Lil mentions picking the crust Zombie's blood from her body] "Footprints in a patch of thick patch of grass caught my attention", was 'patch' supposed to be repeated? and I noticed that in,[like four paragraph/sections down] "..The tinny sounds the staircase made as I traveled down it gave me chills..", 'tiny' is mispelled X_X But, Mistakes or not, This is STILL one of my favorite stories. I love it. :] I'd give you a cookie for updating but I can't. :]
John Westcott 2008-07-02 ch 7,	abuse"jagged with shadows" - a really nice use of words there. Love that line. "Squinting, I leaned forward and peered at the hill on the other side of the river. A dying sliver of sun could be seen peeking over the hill. To my horror, a tiny silhouetted figure appeared on the top of the hill. Soon more joined it until a large group had assembled. I screamed for Aidan and within seconds he was by my side. He handed me the .22 wordlessly." Also some great stuff there. That is classic horror right there. Well done.
John Westcott 2008-06-13 ch 6,	abuseAs I read this particular chapter I was for some reason reminded of "Shaun Of The Dead", perhaps it was the ending of the chapter, I'm not sure. That's a good thing, by the way. ;) Your Whedon-esque influences continue to shine through and you make them your own, rather than a straight copy, which is fantastic. Well done.

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