Cool. I like vampires and super natural stuff. Awesome story, even though everyone died in the end. Oh well.

I know it's mean to say this, but Sal is a bitch. I don't want James to die! He's cool! Grey wouldn't be a half bad guy if he didn't bother that girl. Great chapter (:

-GN Perone

Thank God he's alright. But they are so heartless! Using poor James to just die like that. That's not fair. Stupid S. Well, good chapter (:

-GN Perone

Cool beginning. Funny too. I hope James is okay, and I loved that other story of yours so I decided to look at the other things you've written (:

-GN Perone

Great addition. Nice job with the cruel characters. Good work.

~Twilight Starr~

Ooh, lovers. This is definitely interesting. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Nice addition. Good job with the characters. They're original.

~Twilight Starr~

Great start. It looks like this is going to be very interesting. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Good job with this. I am glad that S got hers. It's a pity that James and the girl had to die, but it made the revenge scene that much better and I look forward to reading more stories that you post.

SirScott

I felt sorry for Agent Grey. We finally learned how he stayed so young. And it's nice to learn their real names. It gives the reader a lot of stuff to ponder about your characters.

~SirScott

The cat was pretty funny in this chapter. And the reader is beginning to learn more about the characters.

~SirScott

Where did the title come from? I would love to know how a bedtime story is relevant to paranormal investigations.
It is rather rushed. I'd like to know more about the mediums, what Grey and James are and what souls have to do with Grey being young. The line about James and Fluffy in the bathroom is hilarious, but if James was left there alone with a wounded Grey and didn't leave, why is he locked in the bathroom? And why is Fluffy there too? It's a bit odd how you show us so much about Mina and the VPC and then basically ignore them. What did they think of the end of the PIA? While I have many questions about the world, and how this plot works, I really enjoyed reading the story.

nice ending, haha. i await your next adventure!

well this is just very bizaare in an interesting way, but sure, go ahead and put up eight, why not? latin's cool..i only know that phrase from Dead Poet's Society...sieze the day, carpe deim or whatever it is...ha. i think that's latin? but that stuff is way cooler than last years 2007 graduating class phrase.

ich liebe CSI! an oh boy, new character with cane! pimp-tastic!