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Lady Knight 1512 2008-07-05 ch 37,	abuseYou know, my fave characters in this were Anderson and Molly. Molly was beautiful. Who COULDN'T love Molly? Seriously. I thought her little walk out of the child care centre was so cute, but i would have freaked if i'd been her parents. Much like Danny actually. As for Anderson, well, i really thought he stole the show. He was so funny, and i got to, the smart one. He kept telling Danny to read the submissions. He was right to! Janie should be thanking Anderson that he managed to convince Danny to open them. I was sad to hear that Maggie had had cancer and couldn't have more kids. She and David were such great parents, and it's true; if not for the cancer, they would have been perfectly suited to having a whole brood of Matheson's. As it stands, meeting the kids was cool. LoL. Beo and Molly were cute enough on their own, but put them together and you have cuteness of cataclysmic proportions. Finn trying to cool Molly with his hand in the hospital was remarkably sweet too.
You'll.Never.Know 2008-07-04 ch 13,	abuseI loved the sly little mention of the CFF and LL foundations :') it made me smile. Another typo, sorry, I really don't mean to be such a stickler about these :S “You two, honey!” Deirdre chirped. “God, you’re adorable!” - Should be 'too'. Still really enjoying it :) Deffinitely voting for you again in SKOW awards !
You'll.Never.Know 2008-07-03 ch 9,	abuseSpotted two spelling mistakes: "He smiled before pushing a kiss to her temple, “I do, and you better be okay. I’ll ring his neck if he makes you cry like this again. You know I can’t stand it when either of you ladies cry,” he motioned to the girls." - Should be 'wring', not 'ring'. " At the time of their meeting she was wearing a shear black gown with a neckline that cut down almost to her navel" - Should be 'sheer', not 'shear' Other than that, I'm really enjoying the story :) I always loved Danny and Janie!
rachely 2008-06-29 ch 37,	abuseGosh, so good. :) Stopped in the middle of this one to read the first, then picked up where I left off. And seeing how I have no plans tonight :(, I think I'll start the third and final book. :) Great job!
HelloLovely 2008-06-27 ch 37,	abuseSo good!! I can't wait to read Speaking of You! Love, Becca
HelloLovely 2008-06-25 ch 13,	abuseNoo! I knew it was going to happen, but no! Haha, I really don't like Fisherman, and it's not anything against him, it's just that i like Danny way too much. :] Love, Becca
HelloLovely 2008-06-25 ch 12,	abuseGah! I like George because he seems like a nice character, but at the same time I'm sort of predetermined to hate him on Danny's account. I hate love triangle with a burning passion, usually because the guy I want the character to end up with is the opposite of the one she actually does. But I think she's going to end up with Danny in this one. I'd absolutely hate if she didn't. It would just be gr. :] Love, Becca
HelloLovely 2008-06-24 ch 9,	abuseAhh! i love him. I really do. Danny is just so great. i love how we're only nine chapters in and I know Danny and Janie so well. But I wanna know how long it's going to take for him to break up with Deirdre and even more so, how long he's gonna take to tell Janie. I'm going to assume that it'll be by about the 35th chapter, unless they get together and go all askew and then at the very end they get back together. i can't wait for more of the manuscript. And I like how, though fate is using another medium, it's not exactly the same as the dreams. Like he doesn't get the manuscript ALL the time, and it doesn't have the same effect on him as it did on Maggie. I like that you could make the characters so much more their own person by how they react to this. Love, Becca
Abigail Night 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseLove it! Give me more! PLease!
Jevanminx 2008-06-24 ch 37,	abuseThis story was amazing, as was the last one. I love, and hate, hehehe the small bit of mystery left over who wrote the manuscript. But the drama and everything, along with all the ends coming together, with the comments that lead to the next story made me truly enjoy reading this. JM
Sarahj259 2008-06-23 ch 37,	abuseGreat Storyness! YAYAY! I think I may have said this before but I'll say this again...WHY AREN'T YOU PUBLISHED??! If you were...I'd totally read your books everyday...well not everyday...but at least once a year...or so...but I'd buy them! Your writing is better then Taylor Swift's hair (I don't like Taylor Swift as a musician, a woman, or even as a human being but you have to admit her hair is ** brilliant) Anywho...GOOd JOB!!
scenezz 2008-06-23 ch 37,	abuseYou are so ridiculously talented, it's ridiculous. I love the story as I do all of your stories. Can't wait to read more of your writing.
bella 2008-06-23 ch 22, anon.	abusegreat story, I read it the first time round, but was just skimming through today. You have a typo near the start Molly says “Can I pay?” but means can I "play" Other than that just as awesome as always
Sarahj259 2008-06-23 ch 33,	abuseOH SNAP!
beinginfinite 2008-06-23 ch 37,	abuseand so it ends. this story has been absolutely amazing. never EVER take it off the site okay? and please please please put up speaking of you as soon as you can. you did a brilliant job with this. if i were a publisher, youd be more popular than Deb right now :) great job.

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