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| Gabbyretro 2007-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseHey, I'm not really into rap songs and stuff but, i def like ur writing. The raps r really cool and so not cliche. I like the party one a lot. -Looking forward for more Gabbyretro |
| b-U-b-TRUE 2007-09-28 ch 2, | abusehey this is cool! You make some very good points and it's definitely catchy. I would have to say it would be great if you enforced the 'survival' thing a bit more...just because at times I forgot what the rap was about...but you sum it up at the end so that's awesome! Anyways, thanks for your review and take care! b-U-b-TRUE |
| Oracle of Destiny 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abusePersonally I think this song is optimistic and very upbeat. I loved the different ryhming structure - at least it's a proper rap I think :) It just goes to show that in order to write a good rap song you DON'T have to include swear words, like the ones you hear today. Keep up with the good songs - hope you'll put them up ;-) |