Reviews for Narcissus: A Legend That Is Not Forgotten

Twilight Starr 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseGood poem. ~Twilight Starr~
hatefulmemories 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseI thought it was beautiful, keep up the good work! :)
Luny Loona 2007-10-02 ch 1,	abuseI prefer rhyming poetry, but this is pretty good. I like how it's about thinking back at something bad [the guy?] did.
AngelicDream 2007-09-30 ch 1,	abusei love this. its beautiful.
Taylary Daisuke 2007-09-28 ch 1,	abusehey hey hey, this is actually really nice. Props to you girl. Nice concept and everything. You should relase this poem. I can see it as one of those poems we are forced to read in high school but end up liking.
Arafax 2007-09-27 ch 1,	abuseSince I myself am new to writing, I cannot offer any constructive criticism. While most of my poetry is rhymed and I have just started playing around with free verse, I think you did a very good job with the topic here. Very good word use. It gives you a clear mental picture and the emotion is portrayed well. At least to me it was. So there is my review. Take it or leave it. And keep up the good work. ~Arafax~