Cool one, sad, though.

The last line makes me wonder if you're trying to find the other girl or yourself. Anyway, I really like this. I love how you write, how real you make everything seem, how down-to-earth the story seems. Are you planning on continuing it at all?

wow. I really enjoyed this. your prose takes on the anylytical factual yet descriptive, emotionally detached yet rendering emotion that is so very "you". one suggestion, the last line, it could use a little more description, other than that, i love it.

I must say I'm impressed.

Once again, I thought you crafted a wonderful story. It was a very unique and interesting idea, and I really liked how you expressed it. I found the ending was quite moving, actually.

I like your writing style, and it's been a pleasure reading your pieces. Looking forward to more. :)

God bless,

Chris

Aw...nicely written. ) Tell me moore.

It seemed sort of happy-ish at first, but then it was kind of sad at the end...