Oo, this is excellent. I especially love the last line. Is that something I may quote, with full credit givin?

Is this truly based on a dream you had? I had to ask. =P

Either way, this is pretty good. Even in such a short piece you manage to create a world. It actually makes me want to know more about the fairy-language and the chaotic city.

Very well done!

Wow... this is only a few paragraphs, and yet a whole story.

I frequently write weird things like this. Now I'm glad to find that someone else does, too. (And is quite possibly better at it than I am.)

Oh wow. That is so cool! Was it really your dream? My dreams are nothing like that. I loved the last paragraph, it was my favorite.