Wonderful poem. Very thought invoking.

Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

So true! I really like the line "dying for beauty when each breath you take is pure." I wish more people thought like this. Nice job.

hm... Nice choice on dedicating it to Tab. You are totally going to kill me in the contest this year. I'm such a noob to this. Amazing, as usual.

This poem really describes how society is today. Good job on this one.

~SirScott