So much truth, so much faith, undying honesty, of words on mere paper. Beautiful.

my goodness, fantastic poem!

i adore the rhyming (i admire anyone who can rhyme at all- i can't). it gives the poem a soft undulation (if that makes sense) when it's read aloud.

"Aged black by breathe and time." - i think you mean breath?

clear ending with a honest statement