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aicilef
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseUhh, dictionary please? Just kidding. I especially like the imagery of the thrid one.
SneakySnake26
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseWow. You are a true poet; your works smack of excellence...bravo.
simpleplan13
2008-03-31
ch 50,
abusethe ending with the onion thing was kinda funny... the rest of it was nice
electric feel
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusei like all of these. they are brief enough, and detailed enough, to invoke very clear memories (from me-and probably the other readers).


did you put them together for any reason other than the format?
simpleplan13
2008-03-22
ch 49,
abusevery true.. I really like the ending. And the title is pretty awesome too.
simpleplan13
2008-03-21
ch 48,
abusesecond line I think fp ate a space between myself and this... I love the phrase "fiefdom's strong fortress wall"
simpleplan13
2008-03-17
ch 46,
abusevery true and sweet
simpleplan13
2008-02-17
ch 45,
abuseI love the line about following your nose
simpleplan13
2008-02-15
ch 44,
abuseI like the rhyming... the first two lines are especially great
simpleplan13
2008-02-13
ch 43,
abuseI love the first stanza... the rest is lots of name dropping... most of which I dont know lol
simpleplan13
2008-02-09
ch 42,
abuseI really like the first part
simpleplan13
2008-02-04
ch 41,
abuseI love the last two stanzas.. very true
simpleplan13
2008-02-03
ch 40,
abusevery interesting.. I really like the beginning and the end
simpleplan13
2008-02-02
ch 39,
abuseinteresting how you went from cold to warm... that was nice
simpleplan13
2008-02-01
ch 38,
abuseI really like the first line a lot
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