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| aicilef 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseUhh, dictionary please? Just kidding. I especially like the imagery of the thrid one. |
| SneakySnake26 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. You are a true poet; your works smack of excellence...bravo. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-31 ch 50, | abusethe ending with the onion thing was kinda funny... the rest of it was nice |
| electric feel 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusei like all of these. they are brief enough, and detailed enough, to invoke very clear memories (from me-and probably the other readers). did you put them together for any reason other than the format? |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-22 ch 49, | abusevery true.. I really like the ending. And the title is pretty awesome too. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-21 ch 48, | abusesecond line I think fp ate a space between myself and this... I love the phrase "fiefdom's strong fortress wall" |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-17 ch 46, | abusevery true and sweet |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-17 ch 45, | abuseI love the line about following your nose |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-15 ch 44, | abuseI like the rhyming... the first two lines are especially great |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-13 ch 43, | abuseI love the first stanza... the rest is lots of name dropping... most of which I dont know lol |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-09 ch 42, | abuseI really like the first part |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-04 ch 41, | abuseI love the last two stanzas.. very true |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-03 ch 40, | abusevery interesting.. I really like the beginning and the end |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-02 ch 39, | abuseinteresting how you went from cold to warm... that was nice |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-01 ch 38, | abuseI really like the first line a lot |