Amazing! This was even better than the last chapter, and I hadn't thought that would be possible! I think I love you, just so you know.

Seriously, though, that's one impressive cliffie. I almost cried when I realized the chapter was over. Please, sir, may I have some more?

lovely. :)

i already like river! yey!

anyways... alex...hm...seems like a nice guy..would be interesting to see if that goes anywhere, even with a character other than charlie.

callie seems to be falling, fast.

overall i like where its going! keep up the good work!

Great chappie!

Please update soon, I am so waiting!

i think that callie should be a good cook. seriously. but then again, that worked well.

adam seems like a bitch.

i really like where this is going.

whats with the brother thing? seriously... we think alike. its great.

Incredible beginning! I loved every word, and I'll be waiting breathlessly for more!

great start. :)