|Reviews for Cycle|
| ticktockman 5/1/08 . chapter 1
it is lovely seeing the world from a different angle that we are used to. I love this.
| simpleplan13 2/4/08 . chapter 1
The idea of using bees is really interesting... its not an animal or creature most ppl like, yet you definitely made me relate to them... very good piece.. a new take on the whole idea..
| Oracle of Destiny 10/12/07 . chapter 1
I loved this poem! I felt sorry for the bees when it was winter and everything was dying. I cheered (with the them!) as summer brought new life for the bees. It really does show the cycle of life especially in nature and different seasons. Well done!
| i am not what i have 10/5/07 . chapter 1
this poem is truly beautiful! interesting subject :)
| xEmoMuffinx 10/5/07 . chapter 1
Another review I felt compelled to make. I like your poem! It's got a good moral theme! I reckon yours has a more realistic one than mine..."determination...persistence..."...*shiver*
Anyway, nice rhymes! I find it a bit hard to find the appropriate word if I have to stick to a rhyming pattern.
| RuathaWehrling 10/3/07 . chapter 1
Hello! Cute poem. :)
The one bit of criticism that I have is that the last stanza doesn't rhyme like the others do. "Rainfall" doesn't match "once more". It sort of through me off when I was reading it. You might want to look at it.
Nice work, otherwise! Hope you did well in the contest!
| Near 9/28/07 . chapter 1
Pale grass? Wow, I love that! -
Your poem makes me fell cold. It made me fell like the bees were asking, "so what do we do now?"