hey hey hey...that was really really good.
You should keep going!
-Delfemia-Chan994

wow i really didn't see that coming, great plot, great execution very realistic that ending is so very alluringly wrong, i absolutely love it!!

I loved this. It was beautifully written. I love epidemic stories, and this was amazing. I wish you'd go further with it.

Absolutely amazing! So wonderfully descriptive, I wanna go get some advil and some eye drops or something! Brilliant!

great so far!

I'm sorry to see that you stopped there. I'd love to see how it goes on. The way you've written it was brilliant, you just brought the suspention up to an overhelming crescendo. It would be awesome if you'd continue this.

hey...y'd you stop, I was getting into it. Contiunue please!

Excellent. Really interesting to read.