Oh, this is lovely. :)

I like the line "In silver bloodstains" because it contradicts itself, somewhat.

Overall, a great imagery piece!

AvidWriter-92

Hiya :)

I liked this one, I liked how you described the tears as falling on both your soul and heart, that's emotionally powerful, and a good choice of words there.

I like the imagery too, silvery tears, I see them like mercury aka quicksilver, falling on the heart, looking like liquid silver, sliding off. (Damn, I should be a poet!)

I liked that.

Good job

Suzanna from the review marathon, see link in profile.

Simple beauty. I love it.

Wow, beautiful imagery, and choice of words. Amazing, Wonderful job!

Dreaming Chica

Ah so nice, I wish I could write haiku to...

- Yuki

Though not as great as the first one I read, this one still gives the same nice amount of imagery that you had in the first one.

This actually reminds me of a poem I read a long time ago about a girl that was trying to perfect herself for everybody else, and in the effect of that she lost herself. But from not knowing herself, she felt like her heart was stained and blah, blah, blah.

I probably got this haiku all wrong, so feel free to correct me and tell me what you really meant by it.

C.S.

You managed to say so much in one small haiku. Nice job.

And, thanks for the review.

Rowan.

Again, nice job with the imagery!

nice job...i relly like this :]

...Lie

interesting... quite deep, too. nice haiku, you should write more of these.

-Dr34mer