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| Dormio 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseSimple beauty. I love it. |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, beautiful imagery, and choice of words. Amazing, Wonderful job! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| Yuki Nabe 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseAh so nice, I wish I could write haiku to... - Yuki |
| criti-sized 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThough not as great as the first one I read, this one still gives the same nice amount of imagery that you had in the first one. This actually reminds me of a poem I read a long time ago about a girl that was trying to perfect herself for everybody else, and in the effect of that she lost herself. But from not knowing herself, she felt like her heart was stained and blah, blah, blah. I probably got this haiku all wrong, so feel free to correct me and tell me what you really meant by it. C.S. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseYou managed to say so much in one small haiku. Nice job. And, thanks for the review. Rowan. |
| ohthevoices 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseAgain, nice job with the imagery! |
| upsidedown.underwater 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abusenice job...i relly like this :] ...~Lie |
| JcLkTb 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... quite deep, too. nice haiku, you should write more of these. -Dr34mer |