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| noriepie 2008-07-15 ch 9,  | abusesometimes i get lost in this story i don't know what's going on other than that, its interesting keep on updating! what is wrong with her? did she fainted? |
| xoxo1 2008-07-14 ch 9, | abuseyay, you're backk with the story omg, what happened!? *tries to think of what else to say* -shrugs- my mind is blank, kids gave me trouble all day can't wait for more though xx |
| poetxoxgurl 2008-06-27 ch 8, | abusemore plz lik soon! |
| noriepie 2008-04-20 ch 8, | abusejon is that guy that paid her for a bj right? i think so wow. this story does have what the title implies...a lot |
| noriepie 2008-04-20 ch 7, | abuseum one problem she said she's wearing Edgar's boxers in the beginning of the chapter then she said she's giving aiden his fav. boxer... makes no sense |
| heartfeltlove 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abuseOh intresting! Awesome Chapter ^.^ But you have florida's november weather down to a science! Do you live here? |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abuseUgh, cliffhanger! But hey, she's back at the Stacks!! Awesome chapter, still love this plotline to absolue pieces!! Cant wait to read more, as usual! ^_^ -Aria |
| xoxo1 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abusejon? ahh, its that stupid arrogant shit xD the chapter was pretty short though... not that im complaining much, rather have something than nothing :] |
| runningXwithXtheXwerewolves 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abuseYAY more detail! Keep up the great work. as a suggestion maybe you can add two chapters into on chapter so it is longer. Keep up the great work. UPDATE SOON! :P |
| Kbelle1 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abuseGood Chapter. Update again soon |
| runningXwithXtheXwerewolves 2008-04-09 ch 7, | abuseyou really need detail and I (underline the I thousands of times and make five times bolder) would like the chapters longer but that is just me. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE SOON!! :P |
| CandanyBaby 2008-04-04 ch 4, | abusehaha lol its ok 4 u just to say black people it wont offend ppl i wud hope im black and i have no problem with it |
| heartfeltlove 2008-04-03 ch 7, | abusepenis sizes... always a lovley topic lol Awesome chapter |
| Kbelle1 2008-04-03 ch 7, | abuseGood Story. Pls update soon |
| eternally-yours 2008-04-03 ch 7, | abuselikin where this story is going |