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| Thoughtful Silence 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseI can't think of anything to say about this other than it was beautiful. It had such wonderful imagery with a wonderful flow. Yup, wonderful :) |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseVery visual and poignant. Good haiku. |
| Aranel du Lac 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI can see the picture you were staring at! So few words but so much to see. Very beautiful, something to bring the light back into a gray day. |
| Chameleon81 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThis conveys a very gentle feeling. Very nice. |
| Basara 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abusehm... a natural picture... nice.. |
| RavenclawDragon 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseNice. I like the imagery in this. :] ~RM |
| burning in effigy 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abusevery cool how the title of the poem is technically in the poem itself; paints a lovely picture :) |
| Eagle Seance 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseGood use of personification here. |