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Meep Forever 2 2008-07-21 ch 1,	abuseHello! I am the friend of LoneWolf-234!! I finally made an account! So here I am reviewing, the story is SO GOOD! It's very original! I Love it!! you're updating faster! Yay!
Sydney-J 14 2008-07-10 ch 9,	abusewhy would harvey hurt his own sister?
K.P. Crest 2008-07-09 ch 9,	abuseaah! the suspense!! so i really was sure that someone important was going to die but the author's note (or w/e it's called) said that no one is going to die!! thank god!! and i loved the James Earl Jones part. classic. but anyways, please write more!!
Moonlight-Lilly 2008-07-08 ch 9,	abusei have to say that i luv your story! its very good and i hope you update soon.
pinkeclipse 2008-07-07 ch 9,	abusethanks for the chapter! the action begins!!
WriterGurl123 2008-07-07 ch 9,	abuseLoved the chapter and it definitely sets up some tension and wanting to read the next chapter. I especially loved the narration part with James Earl Jones, we all know that he narrates every movie on the face of the earth, and he's damn good at it too! lol Can't wait for the next chapter!
LoneWolf-234 2008-07-07 ch 9,	abuseyep yep all exsplanations are fufilling. Awsomfull chapter cant wait to see what happens next!
not so random 2008-07-07 ch 9,	abuseI feel so bad for Nyx's dad. I am dying to read more so PLEASE WRITE MORE!
JustAnotherLibroLover 2008-07-07 ch 9,	abuseAH! That's just mean! Hee Hee! I can't wait for the next chapter!. Hmm, just a couple of questions... 1)What's up with Ra's parents? 2)What did Ra do to freaky witch girl Ami? I can't wait for your next chapter!
Otseis Ragnarok 2008-07-07 ch 1,	abuseHoly god your paragraphs are long. So annoying to read, I couldn't finish... (sorry). (I got up to about the point where the pink-haired girl trips Ra). But I'll talk about what I did read, before I go blind. I liked a lot of what was happening. Aside from the main characters, Ra and Step being total Mary-sues, this is 1,0 times better than the other story I read. Most character names annoyed me, though. How is an entire school filled with people with names that are entirely too badass for any parent to come up with on their own? Sometimes, you need an eggbert or something to make your world seem more realistic, no matter how supernatural you make things. However, I did like the way you portrayed Ra's thoughts in parenthesis. It was a nice little detail. I also Liked the way Nyx read her thoughts, and already knew her language. BTW, was that Spanish, Italian, or Portugese?
madeyes61 2008-07-07 ch 9,	abuseWow. Once again, you took the plot line that you set up in the first couple chapters and twisted it into one firery detail after another. With your stunning use of word and action of your characters you spun a great and beauty tale of love and how far it takes you. I'm never disappointed with your chapters and it was very nice to learn more about Nyx's past.
WriterGurl123 2008-07-06 ch 8,	abuseSo Akakios is Nyx's uncle? I'm a bit confused with this part, but it sounds good. I just don't get why he has Step, I'm sure that'll be explained a bit more in the later chapters. Love it!
K.P. Crest 2008-07-06 ch 8,	abuseah, me wanty more, me wanty more!! i want to see how the final showdown goes and what happens! so please write more!! (btw, i'm still working on the pic of nyx)
Tecna 2008-07-06 ch 8,	abuseHey, I'm so sorry I haven't been reviewing, last 4 weeks of college were hectic, I've been so busy with my coursework in psychology. I haven't had time to even check my email. But anyway, now that I've got the time, I have to say I love all three chapters, they are amazing and the progress of the story is brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter, I know it's going to be amazing and that's why you have to update soon. I hope you won't do anything to Step, I really hate it when one of the best characters are always hurt, I know one author who always kills off her brilliant characters (not mentioning any names), and if you do the same, well then, let's just say I won't review your work again... kay? Aside from that update soon, I have to know what's going to happen! Btw, can you do me a favour... please, send me the description of Nyx's and Ra's appearance, I can't recall what they look like. Thank you and update! Tecna ;)
madeyes61 2008-07-06 ch 8,	abuseWhat can I say? You once again blew me away by your stunning use of words and well thought out plot. Your characters just get more rich with each chapter. You never write a disappointing chapter.

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