Wow, pretty wild I must say. But hey, that's a druggy's world! The voice throughout was a great portayl of someone practically losing their mind to cocaine, while still holding onto an understandable train of thought. It was distant enough that the reader could see what was happening, but at the same time, really drew the reader into this twisted world. Great job on the story, Peace

This isn't bad. There's just a few things I'd change around (just a suggestion). The few parts where you're emphasizing with italics and using hyphens, I'd cut back on some of those...It's good to use in moderation otherwise it sounds like you're trying too hard. That and I'd get rid of the last line it doesn't seem to fit tone-wise of the lines previous to it.