Reviews for Logic Slayes The Heart

Benneh
2007-09-28
ch 1,

abuseI enjoyed this, quite a beautiful piece of writing. I'm not usually a fan of works that are wholly centered around 'message' that the author wishes to put across, I tend to feel as if I've been hit over the head with a brick. But, I came away from this with an appreciation of how you wrote it. Perhaps it was the lack of pretentiousness in your writing, or the way you gave aspects of ourselves their own humanity, probably both that lead me to feel a connection, instead of a brick.

Forfeit The Game
2007-09-28
ch 1,

abuseWow. That's a really, really deep piece of work. I really like how you describe the relationships between each of those... I don't know what to call them. Objects? Emotions? But believe me, this makes me want to try writing like that sometime. keep it up!

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