it's not crappy.
it has beautiful imagery. and i love the summary.

"I can't decide whether I want to." This line has such a refreshing human-like quality to it. It's relatable. :)

"i think i'm
falling
(in love)
with you
i can't decide whether i want to"


okay, that line AMAZING

The rest of the poem flows nicely too.

Cute, pretty, and true. I love the love letters, but it's entirely true that just saying it is so much more.
Very awesome.

I love the whole poetry/love thing and how theyre for idiots... and i love the ending "just tell me" its great

ah all your poems are so wonderful =]
I love this.

i have a feeling youre in a similar boat as me with writing...and life is crappy and school is evil

this poem is a bit weaker than your usual works but still fun to read, nice stuff

I like the paradox of it, the narrator is a narrating a poem and saying that he/she doesn't appreciate poetry, not when it comes to expressing emotions at least, when you want to say something like I love you just go ahead and say it don't dance around the fact by writing something mushy and sweet. good job

First of all, let me just say that you are an absolutely brilliant poet.

& I have to stress ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT.

I've never been as speechless as I am now, & I'm having trouble finding the right words to explain how beautiful your writing is.

It's just incredible.

Never stop writing.

~Sabrina

i don't think this is crappy at all.
i love your work. x

:gasp: Great poem! I don't know how you keep coming out with such amazing things.
This is so beautiful and I love it.
School can't want you dead, they'd be robbing FP of a great poet!
Well done with this, hope things get better for you soon.
Lots of love,
[QueenVixta]

i love this love this love this.
i think emphasis properly conveys how water-color soaked brilliant this is. beautiful.
the last line.
i love this, especially the last line.

you dont write much anymore


strange.
this seems very different from you
soft really

I wish I was able to tell him I love him in words instead of in the lines of my notebook. I like this piece a lot. Take care.

This is beautiful. I love the format of it, the first segment is just so right on (except I don't agree that poetry is for idiots, either - far from it!), and the last stanza is just perfection. Gorgeous. Keep writing! :)