interesting, I like it.

Nice poem. You seem to have a real nack for poetry. You don't have a ryme sceme, and don't need one. Your general flow keepks it alive. I also like how the messege of this piece is the importance of frienship.

-Write on! (Sorry, that what you say)

You're a great poet. This...has an underlying message to it, but I'm not sure if my instincts are right. Is it that people...need people more than anything else?

This is really cute, I can imagine it being like a Doctor Suess (sp?) story, with zany animation and a magicle feeling. Good job.

MOUSE